Twist Plus
July 7th, 2007
Book idea?!?
I always loved writing but when I start I think my idea is no good. So what do you think of this?
Anna and Benn (those are my cousin's names) have been best friends since Pre-K and now they're in high school. But when May (this month) comes along, Benn falls in love with her and Anna was just about to ask him to the dance. (And would that be prom or what if it's their first year?) Then May gets in a tragic accident and everyone suspects Anna did it because she knew about May and Benn.
Just be honest. I couldn't tell if it was good or not. It kind of has a twist. Plus, if you have any revisions, you can tell me, and I'll add all of your names in that little acknowledgements thing. ☺
i like it but the part where they think anna did it, i dont like that. cuz she must be pretty crazy. and people cant relate to that, cuz that doesnt happen very often. people like love stories that they can relate to or that could possibly happen. what if may dies and then benn is like horribbly sad and turn it into something that is relatable. or you could just use ur original idea, cuz its ur book. but thats jut my suggestion.
-michelle
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